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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 23 June 2017

The girl in the red coat

The girl in the red coat

One dark day in the middle of the wood there was a little girl with her family in a small town. The forest was super cold and dark I was trying to get home as fast as I could I was starting to cry and my tears was coming out like rain coming out of my red eyes.  

I was super lost in the middle of the woods I couldn’t find my house again. Mum and Dad shouldn’t let me go out by myself again I had to go and find my Mum and Dad. I couldn’t find them anywhere but I still need to keep searching. Finally I found someone that can help me find my Mum and Dad I ran up to the person and ask them if I can use there phone. I rang my Mum and Dad and ask where they were. My Mum told me they were looking for me at the shop. I said “I will be there in a few minutes.”

I was on my way to the shops to meet up with my Mum and Dad to me my grandma was dying because of her heart. Her heart was starting to stop very slowly she 81 years old. I feel so sorry for her then I was at the shop and I saw my grandma at the shop and she was paying for her food and I said
“hi grandma how are you”
 she gave me a big long hug because I haven’t seen her for ages. She didn’t saw me for ages too.


Olivia’s family was getting worried so her family was tried to find her but Olivia’s family couldn’t find her and Olivia’s Mum said “I wish I never let her go to the shop by herself” I was about to cry because Olivia’s grandma took her to her place Olivia’s grandma baked cookie for her family because she like making cookie she think it fun to bake that why Olivia always say grandma can you bake me some cookie she said “ok Olivia then” when she was walking to the kitchen she fall on the ground so I ran up to her and said
“ grandma wake up are you ok grandma wake up. ”
I looked where your heart beats and it wasn’t beating so I was looking for her phone so I rang the hospital but no one answering so I was crying and crying.


Then I heard person was knocking on my grandma door, I was too scared to open the door. I got less scared and I opened the door my heart was racing because it was a robber and he was trying to get in the grandma house. I was super scared, I hit the robber and then I ran away to try get back home I was running as fast as I could I was running in the woods I could hear my Mum and Dad yelling at me like “ Olivia where are you ” I was following their voices and then I found my own house.

I was walking in the house but they were not there so I went back to the wood and I sat on the grass and I stayed in the woods for 2 minutes. Then I walked back home and my Mum and Dad was there and I gave them a big hug and I said to my Mum and Dad “I love you so much.”

The End.

Thursday, 13 April 2017

Beyond the Lines

         Beyond the lines
It was the first battle of the world war, it was muddy and it look gross and disgusting. We were running toward the enemy’s soldiers with our guns ready. The reason we came here is our grandad told us all about the war, we thought it was awesome and scary. He also told us our dad was going to the war this year.

My brother accidentally fell over and heaps of shooting noises scared me, I looked behind me and heaps of soldiers were dying. I helped my brother up to his feet and we started running again. A bomb nearly killed us but we didn't fall over.

Then we found a place to hide from getting shot. I was looking after my little brother to keep him safe and me safe, or this whole war I will be by my side at all times. After I told my little brother all that we finally  found our dad after all this searching.


When we got to him a bomb went off, the person that was there when it went off got killed. We saw heaps and heaps of people who were dying. Dad said “I need to help.”

Dad’s brother died, it broke my Dad’s heart.

The end.

Friday, 17 March 2017

Spencer Park




Spencer park

Last Friday the seniors went to spencer park. We had to pay the office 2 dollars to go on the trip. It was my first time going on a senior school trip, except for the day out with the year 5 and 6s on EOTC week.

We were  going to spencer park we went on the bus to get there. We talked to our friends on the way to spencer park. I was nervous and excited  to go on a trip with the year 5 and 6s.

When we got there Mr Scott gave us a little pep talk. There was another school was there it was South hornby. I think they were going on a school trip as well.

After we got there we got into our class lines and there was heaps of group numbers there were group 1, group 2, group 3 and group 4. The adults split us into smaller groups they were called group A,B,C,D and E. I was in group 4 and letter A.

We had to go on the playground for 10m  to play before we go to the beach. I was going on the hard fun rocky monkey bars the rocky monkey bars was so high up. I was brave and I did it and after that I did something else and I went on the slide because I like the slide so much.

It was 10m and we had to go and line up for a another activity we went to the beach we had to go and line up in are line to get ready to go to the beach.
We had to walk to the beach it was far then when we got there the teacher said something what we can do we are not allowed to go in the water we are not allowed to go far. We had to get I long stick and we had to find heaps of sea shells and had to get feathers and seaweed then when we got all of them we had some morning tea and  when you was finish you  can go on the wet sand and people was decking for water and when we had to leave I got a stick and I write my name on the sand and I write my sister name to.


We walk back and the teacher let us to go and have a drink of water and we was allowed to go to the toilet to.

After that when people got a drink and go to the toilet we had to line up in are group then we went to the wetland when we got there was heaps of horse poo and we saw heaps of spider nest. When we got there was a house and we went inside to because we was allowed to there when people got out we had to take a picture first and then we can leave to was taking for every.

We had to walk back and I was walking with friend she in room 3 when we was finally got there we had lunch and when we had lunch Mr scott gave us one more pep talk and when we was first we was allowed to go on the playground when we was first.

Mr scott said it time to go and we had to go and get everything ready when we was going we was allowed to go and get a fruit and when everyone got a fruit we had to line up in a classroom line and there was to bus there and wahi ako and room 3 went on the first bus and 11 and 12 and room 10 on the second bus and I was so tired but it was a great day.



Thursday, 9 March 2017

My Ruin Story

I was in place called Heaven Nanotech there was a big box, it was even bigger than me. I  kicked it super hard and I knew all of my power and strength was almost gone. The colour of the box was silver. I walked down the broken steps it was scary. I am  at the bottom and I kicked the box again,  there was something inside. I found a phone in the box it was working but it was cracked.
I was hearing something and I was feeling scared, it was going to me so I look back and I jumped on my motorbike. I was going so fast! it was a rocket ship and there was something coming out it was aiming for me, I was freaked out.

I was on my motorbike and I didn’t look where I was going and I slipped and I said
“oh no! my motorbike is broken” so I was trying to make it work but it didn’t so I had to run with my feet I had to go super fast. The rocket ship was going as fast as lighting. It was still coming for me then I went faster and the rocket ship had something coming out.

I went into  a dark tunnel and I thought the rocket stopped chasing me. I rode faster and faster, It was like winning a race. It was also really dark. I aimed a bomb right at the little robots. They exploded into little pieces.

After that I checked if the little robots were in little pieces and they were. Then the rocket ship came and found me. It tried to shoot me but it didn’t get me. I rode off again.

I saw the rocket ship and it turned around and I got my shocking metal slick and put it in the rocket ship and…

My mission is complete I lived yay.

The end.