Once upon a time there was a lot of giraffes and they wanted to go to the swimming pool. They went out of their cage and into the building with the swimming pool. After they got in the building they went to the changing rooms. When they were coming out of the changing rooms they came walking in a straight line towards the swimming pool.
Then the first giraffe went then some others went as well. One giraffe went on the swing and the second giraffes went and ran towards the giraffe. The giraffe just touched the giraffe so he could flip and went into the water. Then the giraffes were going again and again they didn’t want to stop!
Finally they are so tired they went back to their cage and went straight to sleep, “zzzzzzzzz”
Hi Michaela, I really like your story it is really amazing and nice I like it. but you need to put more juicy words in your story but it is really cool.
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Hi Michaela I like the post you did, but maby instead of saying "Then the first giraffe went then some others went as well." in the second parrografe on the first sentence what you can say is "once the first giraffe went in the pool the others followed her in", but I really like the blog post because it was a bit intresting and next time you could make it even more intresting to get us hooked.
ReplyDeleteHi Michaela the Giraffes are so funny i Could of burst into Laughed hahaha it was so funny next time add more funny parts in it next step you mit need to and more betalles
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ReplyDeleteDid the giraffes fit through the door?
I really liked your story because it was really really INTERESTING!
You should make same more stories about the giraffes.