I hope that everybody is going good in quarantine and staying safe at home. Today I would like to show you guys my Action / Adventure Writing. The writing is about ( There is a secret island that nobody know and a villain live there and a hero save the day. Here is my writing.
The Secret Island
So one day my best friend Willow and I were graduating from High School. We have been friends since we were little babies. After we all finished graduating at school Willow and I were thinking about having a long drive. While we were driving, we passed a boat. So then we hope out of the car and we hop in the boat. There was a person ready in the boat and the person was taking us to an island that nobody knows about. Nobody has ever been at the island before. There was some reason a person was living at the island in a secret underground base. His name is Noah John. He is 20 and he has lived on the island for five years. When someone or somebody tries to put a foot on his property he will kill that person straight away. When we arrived at the island we were looking around and we saw a hole in the ground. Willow and I were thinking that it was a secret underground base. We saw Noah hoping out of the underground base then we were hiding. He heard a person walking on his property and he jumped out of the underground base and went to kill the person. Then Willow and I sprinted and we went down the hole. We heard him coming back then we were digging a hole to get out of the underground base. We finally made it out and we arrived at the beach. So the boat was still at the beach and the person on the boat was sleeping. For a minute we thought that Noah came and killed him but he didn’t and he wasn’t dead he was just sleeping. So I went and woke him up with water and I told him “ can you please take us back to our car please that will be awesome” Then he did. When Willow and I went back to our car. We were going back home but then I told Willow can we go to the police station . Because the cops need to know this about the island. So we arrived at the police station. When I was talking to the cops,they weren’t believing Willow and I. When the cops went away I got a gun from the wall and I stole it. Then Willow and I went back to the boat and arrived at the beach. Willow and I were fighting because she didn’t want to listen because I had a plan to get Noah arrested.Then Willow walked off she went and when she looked back there was Noah right behind her and Noah said “ WHAT ARE YOU DOING ON MY PROPERTY!” He yelled. Then Noah got a knife and he was stabbing her to death. After Willow died I hated myself. I was saying “I wish it would happen to me, not her”. I was so upset and angry with myself very much. After Noah said, is there anyone else. So he went back to the underground base. I thought there was nobody else in the ground base then I sprinted inside there and at the last minutes Noah was right behind me. He tried to stab me like he did to Willow. I just remembered I had a gun in my pocket and I shot in the head and there was blood everywhere and he died luckily. While after I sprinted out of the secret underground base. I sprinted as fast to the beach as fast as I could. I went on the boat then it stopped. I had to swim for like 20 minutes until I got to the dry land. Went in the car I didn’t know how to drive. Willow always drives because I had no idea how to drive. So I just remembered what she told me. I went to the police station and I told the cops. When I was telling the cops they finally was believing me. The cops were very sorry cause they didn’t listen to me. I was very upset but I didn’t really care. After I told the cops I told them where the secret island was. I told him his name was Noah. He was living at the island for five years and I told the cops there is a secret underground base. They saw the secret underground base. A week later I got a letter in my mailbox and it said “ Aroha will you like to join the police station and become a cop woman” Then a day later I message them back and I told them of course I want to be. It was a month later and I went back to the island to see if it had changed and it did. The island became a school camping area. It was so cool and magnificent….
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