Room 7 had to write a descriptive writing about an abandoned house. We had to write 3 paragraphs and the sentences had to be four or three sentences long for each paragraph. On the board there were two pieces of paper. The paper was for ideas if we needed a word that could describe the house. Here is my writing that I created about the house.
One evening I was walking and as I walked along I saw an old abandoned house. The cold frozen fog was surrounding the house. As I walked there was a bright red light flashing on and off near the window. All of a sudden in the distance the door opened and it made a big huge squeak sound.
As I was backing away from the house, the wind was blowing the freezing fog toward me. The tree leaves fell down. When I stepped on some leaves it made a big crunch sound. It was so loud you could hear it from a distance far away.
When one of the bats flew in the window it broke into pieces and I was shaking with fear. There was a ghost that flew out of the shadows, it came towards me and went through me. I was so scared when the ghost went through me, I ran away as fast as I could.
Here is a picture of the house
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