In room 7 we have been learning about descriptive writing. We had to describe a picture and the picture was a nice sunny beach. We had to write 3 or 4 paragraphs. I am going to show you my writing that I wrote about the sunny beach. I hope you like my writing. Here it is!
I am at the beach and the bright yellow sun light is shining down on my face. When I get closer to the bright shiny warm ocean it touched my feet. Waves were getting smaller as I take one step at a time.
As I walk on the damp soft sand it makes a satisfying crunch sound. As I walk I hear the ocean crashing together.
The beautiful shiny yellow sun is surrounded by the fluffy white clouds in the sky.
I could smell and taste the salty water from the ocean.
Here is a picture of the sunny beach!
Feel free to comment down below and I will see you next time with another blog post. Bye!
Hello Michaela.I like that your writing could put a picture into my head.I love walking along the beach and like the waves crashing around my feet.I'm not too keen on the salty taste of the water though.What do you like best about the beach?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mrs Cassidy thank you for commenting on my blog. I really appreciate it because people really doesn't comment on my blog. What do you like best about the beach? The best about the beach for me is that I like playing with the sand. What do you like most of the beach? Thank you for commenting on my blog.
DeleteGood morning Michaela.What I like most about going to the beach is,looking in the rock pools to see if I can find any crabs or fish.
DeleteI used to live Balclutha and I would often travel to Kaka Point to see my nana and grandad and I would go to the beach near their home.Do you know where Balclutha is?
have a lovely day