Room 7 have been working on descriptive writing. We had to write about this mountain picture. For writing I am in the Pohutukawa group. We had to write 3 or 2 paragraphs. I only did 2 paragraph. I am going to show you my writing I hope you like it. Here it is.
The white fluffy clouds were surrounded by the bright blue sky. As I walk through the flowers they were blooming wildly. The enormous mountains were covered with snow. The frozen snow was melting because of the hot burning sun.
As I take steps the water moves in a soothing rhythm. When I walk I’d smell the fragrant flowers. It opened up my sense of smell and it reminded me of the past with my family. When I turn my body the cold sharp numbing breeze from the icy mountains touched my face.
The rushing breeze hit the enormous rocky mountains. Here is a picture what it looks like
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