In class we have been doing exposition writing. The writing is about should sports be less competitive or not. So we had to do four paragraph. I did four paragraph about my opinion and fun, lose or win and hurt. I am going to show you my writing hope you enjoy it.
My Opinion I think that sports should be less competitive because when you play sports it should be fun for children. Another reason is that when you play you will not feel bad if you lose or win. Last reason is because if it is not competitive then you want to get yourself hurt
Paragraph 2Fun
I believe that sports should be less competitive because sports should be fun. If sport is fun then more kids would like to play it more. That is my first reason that I think sports should be less competitive.
Paragraph 3 Lose or win
I believe that sports should be less competitive. If sports were competitive sometimes people come up at you and says we won. Then people will feel bad because they lost the game.
Paragraph 4 Hurt
I think that sports should be less competitive. Because when you play maybe the other team will be so competitive and want to win and sometimes they hurt you. That's why I believe that sports should be less competitive.
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