Kia Ora koutou,
Welcome back to my blog. Today in class we have been making are own story's. So my story is about The Fox and the Kitten. Hope you like my story about the Fox and the Kitten.
The Fox and the Kitten
A Fox came upon a Kitten straying from the basket and didn’t want to take the life of such a helpless creature without a good excuse. So the Fox said, “ You are the Kitten that insulted me last year.”
“ That is impossible, sir,” meow the Kitten “for I wasn’t even born then.”
“ Well,” said the Fox, “ You eat from my den.”
“That cannot be,” replied the Kitten, “ for I have never yet tasted chicken.”
“ You drink from my stream then,” continued the Fox.
“Indeed, sir,” said the poor Kitten, “ I have never yet drunk everything but my mother’s water.”
“Well, anyhow,” said the Fox “I’m not going without my dinner,” and he sprang upon the Kitten and swallowed it without another word.
Thank you for coming on my blog. Hope you enjoy reading my story. Feel free to commet down below and I will see you next time with another blog post. Bye and hope you have a good rest of your day.
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